Kids Work

Below are the notices in Kids Work for today. Notices from the last month (if any) are listed below them.

19 April 2012 - 19 December 2012

Week 10 Term 1 Writing

 

We rushed over to the pond to let our frogs go. We ran down the bumpy hill to get to the pond and I didn’t run down the hill I skipped down the hill and I sat down when I got to the side of the pond.

By Lotomau

 

Splash! Went the frogs, they leaped to and fro. They leaped lily pad to lily pad. The frogs jumped into the freezing shimmering little lake. We sat on the side of the lake and watched the frogs jump and play.

By Sasha

 

We rushed over to the Fairview Pond. We had to go down some bumpy hills. The frogs splashed in the shinning water.

By Holly

 

“Wahoo!” I shouted “We’re going for a teddy bears picnic down the gigantic gully.” It smells yuck and it sounds like everyone is shouting at me. It feels burning hot. Crunch! Crunch! I had a bite of my delicious chips they taste like salsa chips. “Yum!” I shouted that was the best packet of chips ever.

By Kendyl

 

Boom! We ambled slowly down the gully so we can have our exciting picnic. We joyfully played games in the burning sun almost all afternoon. We played rob the nest, minis bombs and rollers, egg and spoon races, rolling down the hill and duck, duck goose. I had a fun afternoon.

By Dylan

The frog is green they have fun in the water. They can jump from lily pad to lily pad. Frogs can be camouflaged when they are brown and green. They are eggs when they start then they turn into tadpoles. My frog is called fatty. He always plays around in the tank. Frogs are the best at jumping. They can jump far and fast their legs stretch out. I have never ever seen a frog jump onto a lily pad. Frogs eat flies when they are hungry.

By Daniel

 

Splash! The mini frogs bombed into the pond. They splashed and splashed like a fish. The pond was filled with sparkly lily pads. The frogs jumped onto the lily pads and were happy in their new home.

By Kian

 

Squeak… Squeak off we race to the rolling track, bang, crash go the people rolling down the hill. “I WIN!” I screamed. We go to the other games. SPLAT! Goes the boiled eggs I feel the boiled egg smashing into the ground. We travel to the next game. Duck, duck Goose! I race around the magical circle.

By Kya-Melody

 

The frog is green. The frog jumps. The frog sits on the brown slimy log. Room 10 let the frogs go in the Fairview Pond.

By Jack

 

The frogs got out of the container. “Rrrrbit Rrrrbit” went the frog. We let them go in the pond.

By Hamish

The frogs go “rrrrbit rrrrbit.” The lily pads are so sparkly. I like the lily pads. The frogs are very noisy. I like the frogs because they felt slimy and they jumped around in the tank.

By Isabelle

The frogs splashed like a human bombing into the pool. They are shiny green. They jump from lily pad to lily pad. The frogs weren’t very happy in their tank. We hope they are happy in their new home.

By Jude

 

As soon as we lined up at the door I said to myself. “We are going on a walk today.” We played duck, duck goose, egg and spoon races and minis bombs and rollers.

By Gus

I like the teddy bears picnic. I like sitting with Mike and playing the games down in the gully with Mike.

By Karmen

 

The sun was shining. Its hot rays shone down on me. I dived and grabbed at the delicious food in my lunch box. I had a great time with my friends and of course our teddies. “Urrp” I burped, I looked at my lunch box. It was empty. I grinned, I knew it was time to go and play.

By Solomon

 

I was walking with teddy bear and he tripped me up. As soon as I started to turn my eyes at the gully he sneakily ate my apple.

By Chayse

Splash the frogs jumped onto the lily pads. The sun was shining on the sparkly lily pads. We sat on the green sparkly grass. The frogs jumped happily onto the squishy lily pads.

By Samantha


I was eating my lunch with my teddy.

By Daynah

 

Leaping like a super hero the frogs jumped to the lily pads. The sun blooms down on us. The frogs swam quickly like little fish. The frogs splash through the murky water.

By Trey.

19 April 2012 - 19 December 2012

Parents Writing

 

My mum is beautiful. She has black eyes and dark black hair. When my mum smiles it makes me happy. I love my mum. By Daynah

 

My mum is pretty. She loves me and I love her. Her hair curls up. I snuggle up to my mum. By Daniel

 

My mum has a black hair tie. My mum has brown hair. When mum smiles it makes me happy. By Jack

 

My mum’s hair is blonde. Her eyes are blue, her teeth are white. She has a pretty smile. My mum loves me and my mum makes me happy she kisses me when I go to sleep. She is a bit cuddly and she is delightful. She wears earrings. By Sasha

 

My mum’s hair is blonde like a sparkly shiny princess with steamy stormy yellow hair. Her eyes smile at me and that makes me happy. By Kian

 

I love my mum because she is snuggly and she gives me lots of hugs. I like my mum. By Isabelle

 

When my nana smiles she has wrinkles. She has blonde and curly hair. She is old. When she draws with me it is fun. By Jude

 

My mum is white and she wears hair ties. I love my mum and she is pretty. She has blue eyes. By Hamish

 

My mum’s lips close when she eats. Her hair is blonde and her eyes are bright blue. My Mum’s ears freeze when she gets out of the shower. Mum makes me happy when she smiles. By Kendyl

 

My dad is really cuddly and his hair is black. My dad is friendly. I love my dad he is the best. His eyes are always sparkling at me. His eyes are like golden diamonds. By Kya-Melody

 

Mum has black hair. My mum has had a needle through her chin. She is cuddly. She is beautiful and I love her. By Chayse

 

 

 

I love my mum she is fluffy like my pillow. She is pretty and fun and she makes me smile. By Karmen

 

My dad is handsome. His hair is steamy black. He has shiny skin and crinkly eyes. His eyes are blue like blue berries. His ears look like he has borrowed them from an elephant. By Dylan

 

My mum has golden hair and when mum flips her hair it makes me smile. She walks like a mouse. Her blue eyes sparkle like glitter. By Trey

 

My mum has golden hair and she smiles. She is pretty and funny. Her eyes are shiny. She is cuddly. She has blue eyes like dew in the grass. By Gus

 

My Nana has crinkles when she smiles all around her eyes. My Nana’s hair is white and a little brownish. She has beautiful earrings and her eyes are light brown. She is pretty and her lipstick is cool as well. By Samantha

 

My mum has blue eyes and she is beautiful. Her eyes sparkle like the sun. She is cuddly a lot and I love my mum.   By Lotomau

 

My mum looks like a pretty girl. Her smile makes me smile. Her hair is gold with a little bit of brown. Her eyes are blue and silver. I love my Mum. By Holly

 

My mum’s hair shins like the sun. Her eyes sparkle green like grass sprinkled with dew. Her face is wrinkly when she smiles. My mum’s smile makes me happy. By Solomon

02 April 2012 - 10 December 2012

Week 9 Term 1Writing

 

Gem of the week

I was driving happily to my dance class. I was excitedly eating crackers and my tooth fell out. I quickly told my dad and we hurriedly went back home and quietly put it in a plastic and under my comfortable pillow. I was so excited that I almost exploded!! I have another wiggly tooth I hope it comes out one day. I am so excited I might explode again.

By Sasha


Zoom I hurriedly drove to nana’s house. I ran quickly to the blue door. “Hi nana” I announced I stopped and wiggled my tooth. Wow! My tooth came out I ran to mum and nana excitedly. “Mum, mum” I shouted “my tooth came out!” “Wow!” Mum replied.

By Kendyl

 

“Ouch!” I shrieked as pain shot through my mouth. I had agonizingly pulled my tooth out. It hurt so much I wanted to cry. I was a bit excited but not that much. “Wow!” I shouted as I found I had $5 under my pillow. I excitedly ran out of my room to show my mum. Vroom vroom now we are off on another adventure to buy me a toy.

By Solomon

 

On the weekend we were walking slowly across the road. My tooth began to pop up like a rocket. Until I stomped and stomped it was bleeding wildly.

By Kian

 

When I lost a tooth I was in pain. When it came out we put it in a bag and then we drove happily to the movies with my friends. It was agonizing when it came out. “Come on Samantha” said mum, dad and Zoe because we were in a hurry. I did not like it at all that day.

By Samantha 

 

When I was at home I fell off my bike and dad had to pick me up and put me on my bed. I had a big graze on my leg.

By Daynah

 

My tooth fell out in the weekend. It was sore but not really sore. It was bleeding a little bit in my mouth.

By Jack

 

When I lost a tooth I was agonizingly in pain. It was like getting a tattoo. “Come on Trey” exclaimed dad “you can do it.” “But it hurts badly” I replied “I know, I know!” he said. GRRRR! “Dad, look I pulled it out!”

By Trey


A long time ago when suddenly my tooth was wiggling I ate a red juicy apple and my tiny tooth neatly came out it was exciting. I expectantly put it under my shiny pillow. My dog fidget tried to eat it. At night it stung painfully. We had a power cut that night and I banged into a wall! “Ouch!”

By Kya-Melody


 

Once when I was five I was scared and lonely I tasted blood. I had a wiggly tooth. Wiggle, wiggle where did my tooth go?

By Dylan

 

My tooth was wiggly, really wiggly. Then my mum helped me and my tooth came out.

By Karmen

 

On Friday when I took Mike home my tooth came out and I washed it. Whe  I went to sleep with Mike I put my tooth under my pillow and when I woke up I looked under my pillow. There was $10! By Lotomau

 

I was wiggling my sparkly tooth too much. It bled and bled in my mouth.

By Isabelle

 

When I was happily at the park I slid down the slide. When I jumped up my tooth fell out. I nearly left it behind. I was so excited and there was blood coming out of my mouth.

By Holly

 

I was drinking a milo when suddenly a white thing was floating in it. I put my hand into the cup and pulled out a tooth.

By Chayse


The first time I went down the steep BMX ramp I fell off and grazed my wrist. The second time I did it easily.

By Jude

 

I was sitting on the couch when suddenly there was a bang. My sister kicked me and I grunted “that hurt.” Mum came inside and growled my sister.

By Gus

 

My brother put me on the ground and twisted my ankle. I had to go down to the hospital. When I was in the hospital they had to twist my leg back.

By Hamish

 

I was playing rough with my sister. Pip! Pop! Wiggle wiggle my tooth fell out like quickly. I had a really really wiggly tooth. I could never ever stop smiling!

By Daniel

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